I really love the quality of your line, and your use of light and color, balance of composition, everything- your ability to capture emotion in the characters, keeping it realistic yet illustrative. You're amazing!
I'm very sorry but I can't get it to work because my computer is broken so I'm using my iPad and it's not letting me. But nerdfighter4ever1 has it on um his/her home page as a new fanfic do check it out it's really good!!!